Feedback On Product

Today I have been Gathering feedback from Staff and students of Penwith College. the Following is The Feedback that i have Collected.

Daniella
Very Good Products I like your improved version better because it looks more professional and the wording is better.

Shay
I Really like your DVD Cover, the tag line is Really Catching and the layout and the Design are Professional. Your Video is Good and will appeal to young people. The soundtrack is Brilliant.

Dylan
I think its Pretty cool, I think the Colours work really well and the photo is really Dramatic.

Becky
I think your video has worked really well. I really like the idea of contrasting the old with the new and I really like the way that you have covered the subject from every different angle. I also think that it was a really good idea to show the College from the students' perspective, as this is more appealing for young people who might want to come hwere than if it was presented in a different way. I really like the element of fun that you have kept in your video, and how this has created an atmosphere. It would be good to edit it a bit so that it moves at a slightly faster pace I think, and maybe add in a few more interviews with other people. However, overall I think it's been a great success and can' t wait to see the final piece.

Harvey Rutherford
I think this is an excellent promotional video showing a student's perspective of college life. I like the shots that you have applied effects to such as Jo on the piano, Josh in the music rehearsal room and the shots of Zennor. I think you need to edit out any shots that show the College before it was ready such as the shot of the library with empty shelves. UNfortunately people remember the small errors so be honest and your own harshest critic to make sure that it is the best version possible. I would get rid of the interviews altogether for the final version and have a short but very visual and memorable video. In fact I would almost be tempted to make two versions, one of which is very tightly edited.

GEMZ
I think the colours used are very well chosen e.g. the fact it is cornish colours and design.

Fiona
I like the simple composition, bold fonts and bright colours. Have you considered using consistent fonts? Clear use of the logos to advertise.

Jodie
I really like how you used the bold shapes and colors to catch peoples eye and attract their attention, however i think that maybe the images and words could be a bit more spread out so that everything isn't so cramped.

Charlie
I really like how it is easy to read with bold writing and i like the font of the writing, i think it would look cool if maybe the whole background of the DVD front cover was a picture of the college like the one on the front but bigger, but i think that the back of the DVD case is really cool. And instead of using the Cornish flag on the front of the case you could just have it on the actual DVD like you have already because that looks really effective, but overall i think it is really good.

Alex
The bright yellow brings your attention and the different colours make it nice to look at. Everything is nice and obvious and easy to see, which is great for the reader as it gets straight to the point. Good piece of work.

Lee
The art work really catches your attention with the intense yellow, maybe you could have some writing on the spine of the DVD and be a bit bolder with the fonts for the writing.

Shana
The yellow is really bright and catches your attention, maybe you could add a picture of the new buildings to sow not only just the old buildings.

Evaluation Of Pitch

Woohoo ive done my pitch.

today i presented my work to martin tucker and he really liked it and Said i had the basis for a good Promotional Video but needed to edit some things such as the library section and to put a bit in before the images saying the old and the new.He also liked the music that i had created for the tour part of the video. he also liked the first Design of My DVD cover. i feel really happy that i have managed to get it out of the way now.

Showing of the Product to Client.

Today From 11:00am we shall be showing our products to our client.
I hope that the client likes the Promo DVD and Cover Designs

Today I am going to be handing in my promotional material to harvey so that he can have a look at it. the last thing that i have to do is to get some feedback for the product and then this unit is done "hooray"

Martin Tucker Interview In Promo Video

Yesterday I captured the interview with Martin Tucker and to day I have started to Piece it together into the Video after that I only have to put the Credits in and it is done.